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Date Posted: 14:20:21 01/23/05 Sun
Author: leon
Subject: my first part of my song and my first ever rap song!! any 1 got sum feedback on this ??

(1st verse)
i fort i had a gurl now i aint
this shit fucks me up worse than... fuck it i tink ima faint
got this gut fellin wat if she diche’s me for dat guy frm work?
she sed she like’s me more, now she’s jus fucked off and left me in tha lurch
i wanna knw wat happing between us are we gettin it together
fuck it i wanna knw now or its never
but i dnt wanna know weneva look who u gonna choose me or that guy
i shuldnt b givin u a choice doesn’t matter im goin bye!

(chorus)
why does this shit always happen to me?
this bitch sed she was crazy in love with me
now ive fucked of and left her
shuld of i dun this now or never?

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