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Date Posted: 10:28:26 01/31/02 Thu
Author: Lightning Bug
Author Host/IP: sdn-ar-003gaatlaP149.dialsprint.net / 168.191.95.85
Subject: Really good, Guys....
In reply to: UHC and Methos 's message, "Heroes aren't Born (Fallen Star 1/?)" on 13:46:39 01/28/02 Mon

...this is quite vividly narrative. Plus as an old Superboy/man fan, I am instantly drawn to it. Definitely keep it up...and keep writing...and reading...they go hand in hand.

The only negative that I noticed was "Willow rose to her feet!" , which is the kind of redundancy I am prone to catch, as an old English major. But that is just a minor quibble, which doesn't detract at all.

Please, keep writing...write every day! :o{D}

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