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Date Posted: 16:44:31 05/27/02 Mon
Author: Mornin' FLame
Subject: Leave

Steed Rears and yells cry heard from the surrounding lands as stallio bolts. 'e 'ad been 'ere long and had seen the passing of she, Ginger & Spicy Snow. 'eartbroken 'e forzes it all behind 'im. 'e was no longer a colt scared by a small storm or by wolves attacking herem. 'e was a stallion.... strong muscular as 'e runs up te mountain where 'e 'ad played with Spicy Snow. Eyes harden as 'e runs faster, faster. Tresses tossed back and forth by racing wind. 'is mother's soft words wisper in the wind and 'e wickers out raises dial and throws it around as 'e reaches the top and snorts and tosses dial agian. 'e screams out 'e was leaving. Eyes soften and 'e raise dial clear eyes burst with joy

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[> +understand+ -- Flaming Snow, 17:44:31 05/27/02 Mon

+'e was pleased to see th' brujo leavin' on 'is own accord, for if 'e 'ad not th' King would 'ave 'ad to force 'is leave, for 'e was becomin' strong an' wise. Dome rais'd 'igh 'top magnificent arch, labia give way to deep, low call o' farewell...+

Good luck


OOC: Ahh... awful...


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[> This is a better one :) -- Mornin' Flame, 17:54:23 05/27/02 Mon

Stallion races in and swerves left and right, 'e digs 'ooves into soft ground and 'e wistles. 'e was toughed by 'eartbrake of seeing she, Spicy Snow leave. 'is eyes harden and 'e reaches mountain as 'e starts to climb kicking up dust and 'e speeds up dodging sharp rocks and bush. 'e hears 'is mother's cry from below. 'e dosn't stop, but calls 'is time to leave 'ad come and 'e was ready. 'e was no longer scared by a small thunder storm. 'e ws no longer hiden from wolves, or protected from the world. 'e new this land and 'is 'eart longed for one land of 'is own. 'e was no longer a playfull colt by the stream, 'e was a stallion strong and tough. 'e reaches the top of te mountain and rears higher then ever and turns kicking at the air as wind blows 'is tresses around. A flame burning in the wind never goin' to die out. 'e was Part Mornin'~~ the beginning and freash start of the day, rearing and ready to wake and run; 'e was part Flame~~ burning never dieing out, the rays of the sun we live by and the flash of golden furey. 'is golden coat shines with strip down 'is back and black mane 'is coat was like 'is mother's and 'is spirt like 'is father. 'e lands on ground calls around herem and jumps down off te mountain. 'e hits te ground and gallops off with a last glimps of 'is mother 'e was gone.


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