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Date Posted: 09:29:13 01/22/02 Tue
Author: Zora
Subject: Re: Exercise - read it aloud
In reply to: Zora 's message, "Re: Exercise - read it aloud" on 04:07:43 01/22/02 Tue

Well I'm going to criticise this myself...

I think I missed the point of the exercise... and I didn't read it aloud before I posted it, and as a consequence the rhythm is all off and the alliteration is really clumsy :(

I'll try again tomorrow

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