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Date Posted: 09:17:03 01/31/02 Thu
Author: Zora
Subject: Re: Chapter. 5
In reply to: Vito 's message, "Chapter. 5" on 18:40:03 01/30/02 Wed

>"Of late the sky grows dimmer, and spread all she can
>bear,
> the prey perhaps the swifter, yet to the hunter's
>lair.
>For a steady breeze she carried, and faster she so
>sought,
>for the Lord looks kindly upon us, and upon or foes
>does not."


My general impression of the piece is that the writing is rather hurried and could use some revision. But I LOVED this poem.

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