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Date Posted: 14:15:35 01/29/02 Tue
Author: ridcully
Subject: Re: Exercise - Punctuation
In reply to: Zora 's message, "Exercise - Punctuation" on 04:51:18 01/28/02 Mon

Groll was terribly seasick the constant rocking of the ship was unbearbable he couldn't eat and hadn't for two days now he felt if he did it would take more time to eat then to pitch it but it was the only way he'd ever reach that island suddenly there was a loud thud then a splintering sound Nerina rushed down the wooden stairs into his cabin we just hit a shoal the starboard side has an irrepairable hole in it we're taking on water fast we'll have to bail if we want out alive Shanadra and Ristek followed the Muruk-hai and Faery the two lifeboats were ready to be lowered the companions lept into one as the boat tilted to the startboard side the crew lowered that one first next came their own boat which they jumped into from the tilted deck the captain and his crew didn't waste a second they grabbed their paddles and headed for the shore days west hey shoted Shanadra come back here I want my money back but his cries were drowned out by a booming thunder from the thick dark clouds to the north with that it began to pour and the waves grew to an enormous size and threw their little rowboat around it took only ten minutes until it too was thrown onto the shoal that had sunk the ship the companions too were hurled out of the boat the chilled arctic sea swallowed them all in seconds Groll kicked his legs and flailed his way up to the surface where he spluttered and spat out the water he flailed around and splashed yelling at the others he did so for what seemed eternity to him yet they still did not answer

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Re: Exercise - Punctuation -- Zora, 14:54:18 01/29/02 Tue