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Date Posted: 03:53:10 06/23/02 Sun
Author: Diablo
Author Host/IP: ak-d224.connections.net.nz / 202.154.128.224
Subject: [: one last breath :]



-- i cried out "heaven save me" --

[: innocent pebbles are struck nonchalently, ricocheting from the underneath the wheels as youth flicks the pedate t'ward rear of vessel skillfully, flipping the 'priceless' belonging up to cradle amongst the slender appendi. Having come past this isle earlier that day, her instrument was awaiting idly backstage, from where the girl would make her debut. Now alighting 'pon the denim adorned gams, casual cadence was persued, digits hooked amongst the rearpockets of the extensive jean structure, frayed along the hems due to their collision with the dreary gravel. The peds were garnished in dirt adorned Converse sneakers, laces nonchalently swooning about the soles due to their insecurity. Humble bust was garnished in a simple tank top of rouge hues, a worn denim jacket draped about the narrow shoulder structure. Hopping athletically up onto the edge of the stage, her arrival in the wings went unnoticed .. the more well known artists occupied with their own little world to notice a mere 'little girl'. Indeed, she was at the prime of her adolescence, a fine example of a near seventeen year old teenager obscured by the suffocating society within which she was forced into. Escaped only to run into one of more superiority and diverse equality :]

[: lithe limbs encircle about the matured instrument awaiting patiently for its performance, the girl caressing the aged wood lightly, appreciatively. The many disgusted looks she recieved were almost a distractment .. a young, badly dressed skater idly waiting amongst the backstages to attempt to awe the audience .. what a fuckin' joke :]

[: the adrenaline begins pumping as youth saunters casually toward the centre of the massive stage .. seeming much too large for the small, delicate frame. However, as she seated herself upon the sole chair awaiting tolerantly, something about her captured the heed of the rapidly trickling away mosh pit. She held a sense of flamboyance .. unseen talent. And as the digits strum skillfully 'pon the battered instruments worn strings, a harmonious tune like no other was lured from its maturing interiors. Together with the soprano rock vocals of feminique, quite a spectacle was established, the foot quietly doing its thing, tapping to keep the somewhat fast tempo of the well-lyriced piece :]

I wanted to be like you
I wanted everything
So I tried to be like you
And I got swept away

I didn't know that it was so cold And
You needed someone
To show you the way
So I took your hand and we figured out
That when the tide comes
I'd take you away

If you want to
I can save you
I can take you away from here
So lonely inside
So busy out there
And all you wanted
Was somebody who cares

I'm sinking slowly
So hurry hold me
Your hand is all I have to keep me hanging on
Please can you tell me
So I can finally see
Where you go when you're gone

If you want to
I can save you
I can take you away from here
So lonely inside
So busy out there
And all you wanted
Was somebody who cares

[: well in the swing of things, debut of talented adolescent was becoming more confident by the second, the lids shuttering upon the jaded optics .. the spectrum that had been through the worst .. seen the best. Emotions spilt forth from the obscured heart hidden within the delicate frame. Motions were of deep expression, the labrum moving to allow the lyrics to trespass the orifice, capturing the adoration of many .. seeming to take the heed of onlookers hostage .. this was her call :]

All you wanted was somebody who cares
If you need me you know I'll be there
Oh oh oh oh yeah

If you want to
I can save you
I can take you away from here
So lonely inside
So busy out there
And all you wanted
Was somebody who cares

If you want to
I can save you
I can take you away from here
So lonely inside
So busy out there
And all you wanted
Was somebody who cares

Please can you tell me
So I can finally see
Where you go when you're gone

[: pause was taken momentarily as the optics are exposed once more, to the eruption of cheers from the audience, their appreciation evident .. the performer's obvious. Genial smile flourishes the pallid countenance, yet she was modest, her gratitude owed dubiously t'ward the battered instrument that many believed could never even be touched in fear of perishing :]

-- but i'm down to one last breath --

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