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Subject: Re: Seeds To Fruition

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Carly Svamvour

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Date Posted: 22:02:45 05/01/02 Wed
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In reply to: Hope 's message, "Seeds To Fruition" on 06:12:38 04/27/02 Sat

The only suggestion I'd have is to make both lines start with 'should' or 'shall'.

Other than that, a fine poem on the art of writing and love.

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