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Subject: Re: dark....slammish rhyme...

Author:
Hope

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Date Posted: 07:54:57 05/06/02 Mon
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In reply to: TR White 's message, "dark....slammish rhyme..." on 22:35:26 05/05/02 Sun

>
kinda emotional mind blowing !!! certainly dark but you created a spark
Hope

dark
>
>my itch belly fever is done
>grinning sinning sun
>makes me bitchy I want to run away from everyone
>still free to berieve I do believe
>even though I want to leave
>my oxygen here feeds no one but fear
>so instead I freeze but I stay aware
>the reasons are still so unclear
>but I will breathe without a blur on my knees
>everywhere
>what web I will weave I am still not quite sure
>hypathetically still nieve I fight cold inside burr
>I grieve hotboxed in a dreaded toxin inside I stir
>going around on this misbelief tour that I'm locked in
>I want hide but only with her like we were
>but she is nowhere near I still try to hear
>but this acid rain keeps showering my cranal lobed
>brain
>among the flowering anal globes that are turning me
>insane
>lying in their garden row by row I complain
>I want to go away from knowing this constant pain
>then I notice the sunflowers that hide side by side
>they blow alone until they all finally confide
>their silly sedded secrets baring frilly weeded regrets
>now staring comparing I am not needed here I do sense
>feeling overtaken by the corporate green beans I now
>tense
>living beside their shaken clean mean teens that r so
>dense
>they stroll beside self created serpents without
>presence
>clout or soul purpose I shout about outloud
>from this hole to resurface
>I want out of this crowd!
>this living life like a spidermite without the bite
>just is not right so I take my gas free glider
>to escape into the night
>I will grow into a stronger man when I land oh ya
>right
>my blown hunger will stand beside my stage fright
>my shown blunder will brand a high noon rage delight
>these shy ozone thunder hands are now spying a new
>page bite
>drifting alone under these sands
>the sky turns beige and white it understands
>I want to go see some light tonight.

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Re: dark....slammish rhyme...	Carly	22:36:28 05/08/02 Wed