| Subject: Re: Strife |
Author:
Moonchild
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Date Posted: 22:41:35 09/25/02 Wed
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In reply to:
SandDollar
's message, "Strife" on 18:04:09 09/25/02 Wed
This was written very good with wonderful images. A lot of great lines, good job!
>Hearts gray
>like heaven’s intuition
>of an impending gale
>
>White Terns and Puffins
>sport proud plumage
>
>now thrust recklessly
>and seek
>safety
>
>Lightening
>begets thunder,
>echoes of instability
>to stretch Atlantic
>from distant lands and seas
>
>The seabirds hear
>
>Outlying roars
>beckon chaos to fuel
>the winds
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>Sparce sprigs
>cower
>beneath serene colors
>fluttering
>with dingy hues
>
>Of isolated
>dissenting whispers
>
>The heavens
>know
>
>We all do
>
>
>© SandDollar; 2002
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