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Subject: Re: Fun with Words

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Date Posted: 20:22:42 03/07/02 Thu
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In reply to: Antipodi 's message, "Fun with Words" on 16:00:36 03/07/02 Thu

So well thought and written. Lots of pretty imagery and colorful. Sure did look fun to write! I enjoyed this in all it's creativity :)

>Newspaper played pianos favourite tune
>I was on my own again
>Yet you were all around me
>Now Word played its games of remember
>
>Trees formed forrests of flowers
>I could only watch as birds played an orchestra
>The Violin tried to outsmart the tuba by hitting a
>high note
>This did not work however as The bassoon played its
>lips
>
>Now the story gets interesting
>Imagine you are standing at the edge of a cliff
>Little clouds race far below
>And you look up , see nothing but stars
>I sippped rainbow leomonade
>It was so good
>
>I played with sunshine colours
>The rain was my opponent
>Warm drops like soft honey touched my cheeks
>Now the weather changed
>You could feel its power
>Comming down like a dinosaur screaming
>Hurricans played rooftop ping pong
>
>All was quiet again
>I stood silent and words said their goodbyes
>Yet, they are always with me
>With us all,
>They travel in our minds creating images
>Wonderful word pictures
>Adventures into verbal imagery and touch
>Today I truely did have fun with words

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