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Subject: Re: My Used By Date

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Wanda

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Date Posted: 11:38:15 03/20/02 Wed
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In reply to: Hope 's message, "My Used By Date" on 09:12:01 03/20/02 Wed

Hope; Is there anything worse then the feeling you have been used by someone? I especially like the last stanza, and the question that ended the poem, "Is anybody there?" One does wonder when a person is like stone. I enjoyed the poem. Wanda

>My Used By Date
>
>Was there when needed
>Because he desired
>My used by date
>Must have expired
>
>Me steadfast and true
>I�m being neglected
>Your heart of stone
>I never suspected
>
>When not being there
>Unlike used to be
>Suddenly I realised
>You were using me
>
>Its more of frustration
>Somewhat confused
>Mind being taken
>Heart being used
>
>With my smile fading
>My heart upended
>Wish I knew why
>You had pretended
>
>Have you conscience
>Awake and aware
>Looking inwardly
>Is anybody there ??
>
>Hope �2002

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