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Subject: Re: Mirror

Author:
Moonchild

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Date Posted: 19:09:43 10/11/01 Thu
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In reply to: Loki 's message, "Mirror" on 17:11:35 10/11/01 Thu

Very depressing and powerful words in this but well written. A great read and glad to hear you're fixing things :)

>I step in front of the mirror in my head
>I sensed a spirit that deserved to be dead
>So I traced the blurred outline of my face
>The dark portrait of my own self disgrace
>
>As if waking in a nightmare that won�t end
>Full of insane rules that just refuse to bend
>Seeing my life from the mirror I see the pain
>That I myself stabbed deep into my own brain
>
>And I sit here tormented and all I can do is cry
>A lonely freak that only wants to violently die
>Why do I bother with redemption I am evil
>An Age Of Wonders where I can die from a pill
>
>I look forward to breaking the mirror with ice
>And to watch it crumble as it still tries to entice
>Now watch me stumble towards the drugs at last
>And laugh with me as I fix my failing suicidal past
>
>Loki

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Re: Mirror	JIm AKA Rapid-Fire	20:15:39 10/11/01 Thu