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Subject: Re: Waning

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Date Posted: 17:41:33 11/08/01 Thu
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In reply to: Erin A. Thomas 's message, "Waning" on 04:59:02 11/08/01 Thu

A good read. Especially liked the last 2 lines. Good job!

>Waning
>
>Steadily their spirits fade in decay dying;
>In dull forlorn amaze I watch each stray dying.
>
>Gradually crushed beneath the load of worldly strife,
>Bereft of hope I see them day by day dying.
>
>With great weight in my chest I hear their hearts
>crying
>As lost they walk distressed in disarray dying.
>
>Instead of strive for deeper vibrancy of life,
>They let passions bedim and waste away dying.
>
>Peak of living should be gained exultant sighing
>In the end when imminent is our clay dying.
>
>Zahaar, may you bright shine utmost in spirit rife
>When your fallen form in final breath lay dying.

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