Re: Lying -- Write On Poetry Forum II

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Subject: Re: Lying

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Moonchild

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Date Posted: 08:40:20 11/09/01 Fri
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In reply to: Lori S. Maynard 's message, "Re: Lying" on 20:02:07 11/08/01 Thu

Sorry for the misunderstanding...lol Yep, it was with the mood of the poem. Thanks!

>Oh, I wasn't talking about the use of couplets, I was
>talking about the scheme of the rhyme, the end rhyme.
>Very unusual, the pattern you chose :) It was a good
>read!
>
>Rhyme pattern: aa, aa, aa, aa, bb, cc, dd, ee, aa, aa,
>fg, hh.
>
>I was intrigued with how the first 1/3 of the poem
>started out with the same, solid rhyme and then
>shifted, sort of with the mood of the poem I do
>believe.
>
>Lori
>
>
>>Thanks Lori :) The rhyme is in couplets which is a 2
>>line rhyme.
>>
>>
>>>Unsual use of a rhyme scheme.
>>>
>>>Great message and hopefully many will realize what
>>>they say.
>>>
>>>:)
>>>
>>>Lori

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