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Subject: Re: Danielle

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Moonchild

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Date Posted: 12:33:40 11/16/01 Fri
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In reply to: Crunchy 's message, "Danielle" on 02:28:29 11/16/01 Fri

A beautiful love poem! powerful ending! I enjoyed!

>Danielle
>
>Gentle breezes carry roaring whispers
>The sweet sounds of a once forgotten voice
>With the stinging pain of aching blisters
>Enough to make my eyes grow moist
>
>Lured by fragrant scents heir to a lone rose
>Into a tangled bed of jagged thorns
>Now my heart�s red life blood unending flows
>And there is not a single soul that mourns
>
>Autumn colors �mind me of the passion
>Explode with brilliance, every shade and hue
>Certain it was to be everlastin�
>Another fallacy proven untrue
>
>Her name lies �pon my ears in silent tones
>It�s deafening screech stirs within my heart
>Her gentle touch warms me to my bones
>In such sorrow I dwell since we did part
>
>For Helen, Troy�s armies raged 10,000 strong
>Each man held her lofty in his own eye
>For fair Danielle�s love, it would not be wrong
>That 10,000 times I would gladly die.

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