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Subject: Re: The Bluebird of Happiness

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Roger J. Robicheau - The Poetic Plumber

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Date Posted: 20:11:42 11/24/01 Sat
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In reply to: Jim AKA Rapid-Fire 's message, "The Bluebird of Happiness" on 19:57:32 11/24/01 Sat

>Whoever gave that bird such a name,
>should have to bow his head in shame.
>Bluebird of Happiness, I think not,
>when that little fart's such a good shot.
>
>As he flys by me, up overhead,
>he drops that stuff we all dread.
>White and messy as can be,
>why is it that you target me?
>
>I've never done a thing to you,
>feeding you during the winter, so true.
>Maybe if you ate somewhere down the road,
>you'd find somewhere else to dump your load.
>
>I don't need your whitewash on my car or truck,
>your aim is so deadly, but that's my luck.
>May whoever gave that name to you,
>be under your path when you do your do!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi Jim. It's been awhile. I had an injury which sidelined me, and then the September tragedy kind of slowed me down with the pen for a time. Anyway! The poem was great. It was hilarious. Loved the ending. The do your do thing. You got the knack. Rog

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Re: The Bluebird of Happiness	Jim AKA Rapid-Fire	12:13:26 11/25/01 Sun