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Subject: Re: Moonset

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Roger J. Robicheau - The Poetic Plumber

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Date Posted: 13:53:55 12/09/01 Sun
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In reply to: Erin A. Thomas 's message, "Moonset" on 10:11:46 12/09/01 Sun

I found the poem very relaxing to read. There are many aspects to the moon as you so well noted. I was not familiar with the words Zahaar. Could you shed some moonlight on this word. Roger

Moonset
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>Amid streaming cloudscapes floats directive moon;
>Like a feather falling drifts perfective moon.
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>Soundless autumn winds soft rustle unseen leaves
>Of trees in silhouette of projective moon.
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>Shifting slow and silent in the depths of night
>Sift clouds hemmed in radiance of reflective moon.
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>Faint through broken shroud flicker delicate beams
>As in gentle descent falls respective moon.
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>Upon horizon vast a cloud dragon flies,
>Final hues reflecting from prospective moon.
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>In still serene amazement watches Zahaar
>Wondrous shimmering moods of affective moon.

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