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Subject: Re: -=18th Birthday Beginning=-

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Hope

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Date Posted: 23:34:52 07/23/02 Tue
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In reply to: Rei 's message, "-=18th Birthday Beginning=-" on 12:07:19 07/22/02 Mon

I can relate to the sorrow and sadness in this poem , although my son now in his mid twenties lives close by with guys his own age , I still stress daily over what and where he is , he as caused me endless worry over the years
Hope

A day I thought would be so great
>I day for long I have anticipate
>Through many years, I awaited this date
>Only to be left in a sadden state
>
>The one that I care for cannot be found
>The one that I love for home he is not bound
>The one that I need is not standing on my ground
>I look to the phone not making a sound
>
>His mother and I are in our doubts
>Both ignorant to his whereabouts
>I can't help but cry and pout
>And on my birthday, I let sorrows out
>
>To be an adult, is this what it's supposed to be?
>To sit at home and wonder aimlessly?
>Is this a test for me to see?
>To cry and wait for his words to me?
>
>It seems like forever on this date
>I wish to hear his voice and hear him state
>That he'll see me soon without haste
>So now, I sit, and patiently wait.

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Re: -=18th Birthday Beginning=-	Moonchild	07:06:16 07/25/02 Thu