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Subject: Re: Teardrops


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Date Posted: 19:45:27 09/16/02 Mon
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In reply to: Antipodi 's message, "Teardrops" on 18:56:35 09/16/02 Mon

Very heartfelt and said. Creative how you wrote those middle lines, nice one!



>Soft, warm , emotion..running down sad cheeks
>It caresses and comforts as it washes away pure sorrow
>
>Count the rainbow drops...
>Ten.....leaving you
>Twenty.....Sad dark night
>Thirty......now alone
>
>Close my eyes....wash away your memories
>Now...nothing..to hold..to cherish...
>
>Feel the warm betrayal
>Ten....the denial
>Twenty...the pain
>Thirty...you scream inside
>
>I hold you heart as my traitor
>You took me down this dark path and smiled..
>
>Now..I cry
>Ten....Need you
>Twenty....Want you
>Thirty....Empty arms reach out.
>
>Left in the darkness of true alone
>I pick up the Phone and Dial.....
>
>No answer.
>Just a Message
>"The number you have rang no longer exsists"
>I cry...I am alone..no one hears nor cares.

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