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dj houston
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Date Posted: 20:14:44 09/05/01 Wed
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In reply to:
jane
's message, "i deserve it" on 13:17:25 09/05/01 Wed
>Hi Jane,
You've created a very sad work and I gather that was your intent. I came away feeling great empathy for the author's character. You make it sound like the character is you, but I pray that it is not.
A powerful and disturbing poem.
Sincerely,
dj
I Cut my arms and watch them bleed,
>I smile as i did my deed.
>No one see's the pain im in,
>I guess thats why i cut my skin.
>
>I wish i wasnt invisible,
>I wish i could be seen.
>But im just a kid,
>Just a teen.
>This shouldnt be happening,
>But it is cant u see.
>The more blood i lose the more dead i become,
>Im just stupid, im just dumb.
>Sometimes i dont even understand why i do this,
>Maybe becuz i just want a hug or a kiss.
>Or someone to tell me everything will be alright,
>But no one did.
>And now my arms are scarred,
>And such an ugly site.
>i can stop any time i want to,
>But i feel as if i deserve it.
>Even if i do stop,
>The scars will be reminders.
>And there the memories will sit.
>It doesnt matter,
>My world is such and ugly place,
>And all i am is one big waste
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