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Date Posted:16:16:43 07/20/03 Sun In reply to:
d y b b u k
's message, "[ d e a d . i n s i d e ]" on 11:09:22 07/20/03 Sun
•She grinned down at him and licked his small head. Ah he was a fighter he would make the pride proud. And when he was an adult possibley become higher of the ranks. She flicked her tail and looked down at him.• "The Outlands is where we shall live, son." •The thought of her saying son sent her chills but she growled with pride. She liked it. She looked at him.• "Shall we return home now?"
(Nope, the language is fine. Eh if u dont mind me askin, could you possibley make the font bigger and not so bold its hard to see. Sorry. Was he speaking or was he just thinking this?)
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