I had asked for you to do six posts in all, but I will judge on just four posts so you can get going.
Here are the final results-
Dark Angel:
You did not powerplay at all and your attacks were all realistic, even though you could have varied them a little bit. Your attacks were 1) biting B's belly, 2) rearing to strike B's spine, bucking out towards B's hip joint, then rearing to strike B's poll. Your attacks were all directed to vital areas which could inflict much damage and you had very good spelling. You used much rpg 'horse' vocabulary but the only this you could improve upon is using more 'dictionary' vocabulary and desrpiptive words(adjectives). Also you could have been more graphic/descriptive about wounds and how you were attacked, but, good job! your score is 8. You earn a star :)
Barinai:
You did not powerplay at all and were realsitic, but you could have been slightly more graphic. Your attacks were varied and dodges were good. I was very impressed with your excellent use of adjectives and desrciptive words! You used lots of rpg 'horse'vocabualry and some 'dictionary' vocab, but could have used a little more of the second one. Your style of fighting has molded nicely, and I see a huge improvement. You aimed for the vital areas which was good, but again could have siad more about how you were attacked and the damage you received. You did very well, your score is 8. You earned a star :)
