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Subject: Re: iGnOrEd


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Cameron
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Date Posted: 15:27:27 04/28/02 Sun
In reply to: suz 's message, "Re: iGnOrEd" on 11:51:01 04/28/02 Sun

No offence taken, I am happy to offer help, advice and comments any time.

I too have a stack of "as it was written" raw, gut hurled poetry, some of it good, some of it just anger seeping out of myself and onto the paper. The thing is, that this is fine to get it out, but it can become a little 2 dimensional to the reader.

That is whay I say it depends o what you are aiming for. IF you are writing to be read, then you need to add some flavour, something to hold the reader, this may take a couple of re-writes and opinions from other people. That's all. Otherwise, fine.

Thanks for posting, I'll look out for more of your work. - Cameron

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