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Subject: Dayum! Who Knew Life Was Like This (prologue)

Author:
Dawn

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Date Posted: 12:18:00 03/25/03 Tue

I've been working on this story for a while, but never had the motivation to finish it. I figured if I put it on a board I could at least finish the prologue. lol Well anywayz this is a story about 4 gurls and their baby daddy drama or what not. It's a mix of like four stories so if some of the plots sound familiar it's probably because they are. Now let me see what damage I can do. ~D~Peezy*

FT= final thought
~~~w/ Dawn~~~
~Dawn was sitting in the kitchen in her small one bedroom apartment when in walked Mariah and Nelly.~
Mariah: Hi Mommy! ~hugging Dawn~
Dawn: Hi Riah. You have fun with Daddy?
Mariah: Yep. We went to Chuck E. Cheese1
Dawn: That's great Riah. Now go get ready for bed and I'll be in to tuck you in in a minute.
Mariah: Okay. ~running into the room~
Dawn: You know just cuz you have a key doesn't mean that you should use it.
Nelly: Why? You act like I was interrupting something. Ain't like you got another nigga over here.
Dawn: You never know. I coulda had company.
Nelly: Whateva. You ain't crazy.
Dawn: What the hell is that suppose to mean?
Nelly: That you know betta than to have a nigga up in my spot.
Dawn: Well, I don't remember your name being on the lease or you paying any bills up in this muthafucka so I can have whoever the hell I want up in here.
Nelly: Why you gettin so damn hostile? And that may be true, but you still betta not have a nigga up in my spot and you know what spot I'm talkin bout.
Dawn: Oh so that's your spot now?
Nelly: Hell yeah! Always has been and always will be.
Dawn: But it don't go both ways? You can fuck whoever you want and I'm just suppose to sit at home with your child and look stupid?
Nelly: Boo you know it's not like that.
Dawn: The hell if it ain't. I'm tired of playing these games with you Nelly.
Nelly: What games? You know you got my heart ma.
Dawn: But yet you still don't wanna be with me. And then when I do try to move on and get somebody new you start trippin. I ain't gon keep going in this circle.
Nelly: You know I'm working on some things. Just be patient.
Dawn: Whateva Nelly. ~turning her back on him~
Nelly: You know I'm leaving tomorrow, ri?
Dawn: Yeah. And?
Nelly: You gon let me stay the night?
Dawn: Hell no!
Nelly: ~walking up behind her and putting his arms around her waist~ Come on ma. Please.
Dawn: No... Nelly get off of me.
Nelly: Please?! ~kissing her neck~
Dawn: ~sighing and giving in~ Fine. You can stay. What are we going to do with Mariah?
Nelly: Wait till she goes to sleep and then put her on the couch.
Dawn: You just had this all planned out, huh?
Nelly: Well you know me.
Dawn: Yeah I do. Just a lil too well.
~Later that nite after they've done the damn thang, Nelly thought Dawn was alseep and started to get up.~
Dawn: Where you going?
Nelly: Damn gurl. You skurd me. I ain't know you were still awake.
Dawn: Yeah well I am. Where are you going?
Nelly: I got some business to take care of before I leave.
Dawn: At 2 in the morning?
Nelly: Well...
Dawn: ~trying not to cry~ Whateva Nell. Just go.
Nelly: What's wrong with you?
Dawn: Nuthin. Just get out. And don't wake Riah on your way out.
~Nelly walked out of the room and Dawn began to cry.~
FT: I don't know why I let him do this to me. What a nice way to treat your child and her mother. I already knew what he wanted when he came over and got her. You would think after 6 years I'd be fed up enough to walk away, but I just can't. Love really is blind. Maybe in the future it'll be different, but right now I just can't let go.

~~~w/ Kima and Murphy Lee~~~
Kima: Murph I got something to tell you.
Murph: What?
Kima: ~taking a deep breath~ I'm pregnant.
~Murph just kinda sat there and looked at her.~
Kima: Well aren't you going to say anything?
Murph: What do you want me to say Kima? You know I'm leaving tomorrow and you hit me with this shit.
Kima: I just found out today and I thought you should know.
Murph: Yeah, well thanx! ~sarcastically~
Kima: What's been up with you lately?
Murph: What?
Kima: Lately you've had this str8 stank attitude towards me. What did I do to you?
Murph: Kima I think we both know where this is going?
Kima: Really now? Cuz I don't have a damn clue. Where exactly is this going?
Murph: To me it seems like no where.
Kima: What's that suppose to mean?
Murph: I think we should take a break.
Kima: Take a break? For what?
Murph: It's just I'ma be so far away and ...
Kima: ~cutting him off~ Be real with me Murph. Is this just a "break" or this going to be permanent?
Murph: Kima it's not like...
Kima: No! Tell the truth. Is this the end?
Murph: ~sighing~ Yes.
~Kima was quiet for a long time.~
Murph: Are you...
Kima: ~cutting him off again~ Get out!
Murph: What?
Kima: You heard me. Get your shit and get out.
Murph: Baby it's not that deep.
Kima: I'm not your damn baby. But you wait till I'm having your baby to tell me some shit like this. How could you do this to me?
Murph: Do what? I'm just being real with you.
Kima: Oh really. ~jumping up from her seat~ So what if we had never had this conversation? You was just gon move to ATL and stop calling? And what? Hope I'd figure it out?
Murph: Kima it's not like that.
Kima: Do I look stupid to you? I know this wasn't just spur of the moment. You had to have been thinking about this for a while now. And you were just gon run, huh? You ain't nuthin, but a scared lil bitch.
Murph: ~starting to get upset~ So what? Yeah I been thinking about this for awhile, but I was tryin to be the nice guy and spare your feelings by not telling you mine.
Kima: Well what are you feeling Murph? I'm all ears now.
Murph: I'm feeling like I don't know you like I use to, I'm feeling like there are plenty of other gurls out there for a nigga, and I'm feeling like you're just not what I'm looking for.
Kima: Oh it's like that? ~trying not to show she's hurt~ Well I hope you find what your'e looking for in ATL cuz you sure as hell can't come back here.

I'll be back to finish the rest. Holla!!

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Subject	Author	Date
Dayum! Who Knew Life Was Like This (prologue cont.)	Dawn	14:47:57 03/25/03 Tue
Re: Dayum! Who Knew Life Was Like This (prologue cont.) -- kima, 15:29:28 03/26/03 Wed Dayum! Who Knew Life Was Like This (prologue cont.) -- Dawn, 21:38:27 03/30/03 Sun