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Subject: Re: Life in the Hood of Brooklyn...Storee

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Chelle

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Date Posted: 14:02:11 07/22/02 Mon
In reply to: Chelle 's message, "Re: Life in the Hood of Brooklyn...Profiles" on 11:33:56 07/20/02 Sat

Aiight y'all please bare with me because I am very lost on this story right now but I'ma try to add a lil somethin somethin. But if you have any ideas please let me know. Or you can just add on.

Just then heavy stomps bounded up the steps. Chelle instantly knew them as Tony who was now drunk. She turned off the light and laid very still.

Haze: Who the hell is that?
Chelle: Shhhh. It's Tony. If he knew I was her he'd try to get in my room. So just be very quiet.

Tony made it to the top of the steps and bounded on Brit's door.

Tony: Brittany, I know you're in there open this door. Don't try to act like you're sleep girl. Where's your mother? She left the house a mess.

He got no answer so he just walked away to Chelle's door. Haze wrapped his arms around Chelle since she was shaking pretty badly.

Tony: Chelle open this door you little slut!! I know your ass is in there. Where is your aunt at? She left my house a mess. And if you don't tell me where she is I'll break this door down and kill you.

Chelle didn't say anything or move the whole time. Then in a blink of an eye the door came tumbling down. And stood there in the door way was Tony's 6'3 1/2 in muscular frame.

Tony: Who the hell are you? And what the hell are you doing in my house?
Chelle: This is Haze. He brought me back from the hospital and I told him I didn't wanna stay here by myself so he stayed with me.
Tony: You little slut!! You brought him back her so you could fuck him in my house. Didn't you? Answer me girl before I hurt you.
Chelle: No that isn't true.

Tony reaches for Chelle but Haze blocks her so now he is standing infront of her.

Haze: Look your "neice" has had a very rough day. She's been at the hospital with her friends all day and almost all night. So I think you should leave her alone.
Tony:[laughing] Oh so lil nigga is gonna tell me what to do with the slut that's stayin in MY house? I don't think so.

Who through the first punch? We'll never know. Haze and Tony went to fighting and Chelle ran out of the room and to Brittany's room to call the police.

911: This is 911 is this an emergency?[is it me or do they always ask this question? And I'm like ummm DUH I wouldn't be calling if it weren't...lol lemme stop. Back to the story.]
Chelle: Yes it is.
911: What seems to be the problem, ma'am?
Chelle: Well my drunk wanna be women beatin child molestin no good uncle is beating up my boyfriend right now.
911: Could you please repeat that?
Chelle: Yeah. My drunk wanna be women beatin child molestin no good uncle is beating up my boyfriend right now.
911: What's your address ma'am?
Chelle: 18769 Park Ave.
911: Ok, I have some officers in the area they can be there in 2 to 5 minutes.
Chelle: Okay. Just tell them to come on in. I'ma try to see what I can do until they get here. Thank you.
911: No problem ma'am.

Chelle hangs up the phone and goes back into her room. Tony and Haze are still going. But it seems like Haze has gotten the best of Tony. Haze had Tony on the ground and was stomping him. Chelle tried pulling Haze off of Tony so her carpet wouldn't get all bloody but he wouldn't stop until the police ambushed him.

Officer 1 = O1

O1: So what seemed to be the problem here tonight?
Chelle: Well, I had just come home from being at the hospital all day because the bastard beat my aunt again. My cousin was staying at the hospital with her and he brought me home.
O1: Who is he?
Chelle: My boyfriend Haze.
O1: Okay continue.
Chelle: Well, haze brought me home and I asked him to stay with me because I didn't feel right staying here by myself just for the simple fact is that I knew he, Tony, would come home drunk and try to get in my room. So he stayed and sure enough about an hour and a half after we laid down to go to sleep Tony comes in the house loud as ever screaming for my Aunt Lena and cousin Brittany.
O1: And when he got no answer from them he proceded to your door kicking it down or whatever. And this is when the fight broke out.
Chelle: Yes sir. Tony came in my room calling me a slut and when he reached for me Haze stepped infront of me so he couldn't get to me. That's when...I don't know who swung first but that's when they began to fight.

The officer finishes writing and talking to Chelle while Officer 2 finishes talking and writing down things Haze has said. When the officers leave they take Tony with them so he can go to the ER and then to jail. Haze puts Chelle in her bed and fixes her door.

With Bee

Okay, I know that was bad but don't blame me blame the lack of time I've had to think about an add on. I hope you guys enjoyed it. If you have any ideas please let me know. Or you can just add on.

Peacez,
Chelle

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