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Date Posted: 11:32:00 04/06/03 Sun
Author: TZA
Subject: *stares*
In reply to: Contrary Chameleon 's message, "Intoned!" on 11:22:14 04/06/03 Sun

Speaking rhetorically, has she any bloody *clue* what 'intoned' actually means? Maybe she meant 'imbued', but who knows?

Oh, this comment was up on the PR board:

"Yes. I agree. I've noticed some of the merging problems, as well as the flow of the diologue. But, I never thought of the song breaks between the context was too large or over powerning. It's something I'll look into, but on the topic of a beta reader. Finding a good one these days isn't as easy as it is said to be. Does anyone have any suggestions. I'd like to hear them. Also, I appreciate the honest crit. I have a secondary fic called Broken Wings. I'd be gtareful if you guys would read a crit that as well. I need all the advice I can get. ^_^"

*snickers and laughs* Yeah, she wants to hear honest comments. She wants to improve. Mmhmm...yeah. We've seen that before. But I offered up my two cents on how she could improve one area, and offered my beta-ing services (for what it was worth). Hey, I'm always happy to beta for people who want to improve.

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