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Date Posted: 16:05:43 02/21/03 Fri
Author: Tilly
Subject: Really. Freaking. Weird. Observe:
In reply to: Chiad 's message, "Re: Hmmm . . ." on 13:27:20 02/21/03 Fri

This took me about a half an hour to do; bear with me for a moment. I read through this LOZ badfic that I found last night while googling LQ, as you remember, and as I did so, I noticed even more similarities to the MIL travesty than I had last night. This wasn't hard to do. All I did was find some of the keywords from this fic (I think it's called "Heat," only 'cause that's what's in the URL,) and then I did a "find" for those keywords in MIL. I was really surprised.

I don't think this is LQ, but one of these two ripped the other off in a big, big way. I can't see anyone ripping off LQ, so my hypothesis here is that LQ read this fic, was jealous of Zelda in it, and wrote herself into it instead.

Go on, take a look. It's eerie.



Heat:
"She was not expecting this, and her back arched in sudden extacsy, the loudest vocalization yet escaping her lips. "

MIL:
"Slowly at first then I upped the movements, causing violent spasms to rage threw our bodies, the loudest vocalizations yet escaping past our lips."


Heat:
"They talked of their plans, mostly meaningless dribble of the LonLon Ranch annual get together,"

MIL:
" We just sat there and talked in meaningless dribble about who was going to set up the decorations...."


Heat:
"The sky was setting off tones of deep pink, and lavender, the sun nearly faded from the horizon.

MIL:
"The sky was setting off tones of deep pink, and lavender, the sun starting to set as we neared Dragonmount."


Heat:
"Zelda peered deep into his rippling pools of eyes,"

MIL:
"Then I walked into his arms again and looked into his rippling blue eyes."


Heat:
"He swept his hand up to her immaculate face,"

MIL:
"The candlelight reflected off his immaculate skin,"


Heat:
"She had her hands trickling up his narrow side, slipping off hi tunic so she could feel him bare against her."

MIL:
"As out tongues entwined I felt his hands trickling up my sides as he started sliding down the straps of my dress."


Heat:
"The warmth of Links lean, infatuated body made Zelda moan softly."

MIL:
"I let my soft hands trace over the muscular outlines of his infatuated body,"


Heat:
"He began to slowly thrust his hand in and out of her enchanted body."

MIL:
"Then I begun to cry out in ecstasy as he slowly penetrated my enchanted body."


Heat:
"Her body swam with sensations she had never known existed, and her murmers soon turned into cries of pleasure, and pure excatsy."

MIL:
"My back arched and groans of pure pleasure escaped past my lips. Never had I felt such feelings before. Never had my body ever felt such pleasure."


Heat:
"Her legs shuddered, and he increased his movements speed faster still, her moans soon lasting longer..."

MIL:
"Then I felt myself starting to climax as his fingers thrust deeper upping the movements. My body shuddered from the immense feelings that raged threw it."


Heat:
"She cried out in compltete bilss, heaving her shivering body against his, until an ever more violent spasm raged through her body, causing her to scream in mind boggling pleasure."

MIL:
" I cried out again as I bucked up against Link, my body shuddering in immense bliss, until an even more violent spasm raged it, causing me to scream out in mind boggling pleasure."


Heat:
"."Hmm..more...yes...Link..God...yes," Zelda cried, her entire being having shocks of wonderful pleasure sent through every vien, a tremor raging her body, radiating toward the nucleus between her thighs."

MIL:
" Our bodies withered together as I pumped faster, the sheer ecstasy raged threw my body, radiating toward the nucleus between my legs." (and) "With each thrust, my legs shuddered sending momentary shocks to my lower organs. Then I arched my back, my body screaming in ecstasy as his movements became faster. I reached up and dug my nails into his muscular back as the eternal bliss raced through my every vein."


Heat:
"Link finally climaxed, releasing a warmth into her, causing her to reach her second peak, convulsing violenly, and he thrust against her beautiful form."

MIL:
"My body started convulsing as I felt myself starting to climax. Then his thrusts came in faster beats as he started to climax. Our cries filled the air as we both came to our peaks."


Heat:
"Link cried, again grinding against her shaking, writhing, sweaty screaming form, releasing yet another time into her, causing her now limp, shuddering body to thrust forward in immense bliss,"

MIL:
"Link too cried out in immense bliss as I begun moving faster, grinding against his pelvis, his body shuddering violently..."


Heat:
"groaning, fighting for any left strength, Zelda despreately screaming, and moaning for another climax, bucking against Link, her hands finding thier way scross hs backside, down his legs, and up again..."

MIL:
"Exhausted, I screamed as I tried to find the strength to go on. I clawed into Link's back as I bucked against him. Sweat rolled down our bodies as we fought to climax a second time. I ran my now sweaty hands up and down his back digging my nails into his skin as I pushed up against him. "


Well? Which came first? That's what I'd like to know.

Tilly

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