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Date Posted: 10:20:13 09/29/00 Fri
Author: 又是傅子衛
Subject: Re: Icarus！艾加魯司！
In reply to: 馮志弘 's message, "Icarus！艾加魯司！" on 22:04:10 09/28/00 Thu

小女子罪該萬死！！竟敢在老師面前論及艾加魯司！！我不知道老師你曾經以此為題材作過一首詩！！！！

余學識淺薄，連平仄也攪不清楚，沒資格評老師的詩。但單從內容看（雖然我不知道自己有沒有曲解詩中原意），倒想問問老師，詩中最後一段中的「我」是指你自己嗎？我覺得老師在詩中由此至終均試從敘事者的角度說話，但在最後一段卻出現這個第一人稱，你是不是想在此表達自己的心願／目標呢？假設艾加魯司的做法代表他不惜以死去達成一己心願（那麼說來太陽便是他心目中的最高目標），老師是不是暗示了你現正朝著自己的最高目標進發呢？（以鷹借代自己？）（但為甚麼用「曾經」呢？？莫非理想已達到？）

糟！我想我犯了作詩的大忌──說得太白便不是詩了！！實在不應該苦苦追問你的原意呢！若老師有空的話，我倒想聽聽你對這個神話故事的看法。

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