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Date Posted: 20:35:28 06/14/02 Fri
In reply to:
Prissy
's message, "Re: For the love of money" on 13:56:01 06/13/02 Thu
this is the last part i typed of this story. like i said i plan to re write it. but ill keep this one up here. tell me what ya think
*flashback*
-Mr.Thorton, De'Mario, and Nicole arrive at Mr. Thorton's house. They
all walk toward
the front door-
Mr. Thorton: okay Nicole `mi casa es su casa'. Hope you like it.
-he puts in the key and opens the fromt door to his mansion-like
house. They enetered the vast living room and Nicole immediately
started to cry-
Mr.Thorton: oh why are you crying?
Nicole I ……. I ….want my …..my mommy
Mr. Thorton: she told you that you have to stay here for a while
-Nicole starts to cry harder-
Mr. Thorton: oh okay …… okay Mario take her upstairs to her room will
ya? Come on
now damn.
-Mario takes Nicole's hand and takes her upstairs to see her room-
Mario: calm down dang okay here's your room okay you see it?
-Nicole stoped crying so much o she can see the room the walls were
painted purple and
had dark purple stars and hearts decorated around the room her. To
her right was her bed.
It had purple sheets, pillows and white teddy bear between the
pillows. Right in front of
her was a white dresser with mirror top which was next the window
with light lavender
drapes. By the times Nicole saw all of this, her crying stoped
completely-
Mario: I see you like it. We asked your mom ….well our mom what was
was favorite
color and we've been decprating the room for 2 wks.
-Nicole walked over to the bed, sat on it then picked up the teddy
bear-
Nicole: all of this is for me?
Mario: yeah
Nicole: how old are you?
Mario: Im 9. for a 6 year old you sure do cry loud. You ever seen any
card tricks?
-Nicole shakes her head-
Mario: well heres one I learned yesterday. Its called the four king
robbery. Okay I want
you to take all the kings out of the deck then out the kings on the
top of the deck
- Nicole does it with a little help from Mario. Then Mario slaps the
deck and his hand
together loudly-
Mario: okay you ready? Okay one king goes in the basement, one king
goes for look out,
one king goes for the money and the last king one goes for hostages
-as Mario says where each king card goes, he takes a card off the top
and sticks it some
where in the deck-
Mario: you have magic fingers?
Nicole: I dunno
Mario: -grins- well just tap on the deck 4 time for me
-she does so-
Mario: okay abra cadabra!
-he takes the top 4 cards and flips them over and all the four kings
are there-
Nicole: how you do that? You put the kings in the deck!
Mario: its magic! Plus the help of those magic fingers of yours
-Nicole giggles-
-Nikki is upstairs in a dressing room of the club, fixing her self in
the mirror-
~* now despite of what happened in the VIP room earlier today, I plan
on having fun and
maybe find someone else to mooch off of, HA! Naw, but I got on my
cutest outfit: my
tightest beige shirt….. well not tight… revealing, anyways and my
cutest beige skirt,
comes a lil past my knees. Then I got my nicest most expensive boots
on… damn I look
good! I just have to acessorise a lil ….. silver bracelets, silver
hoop earings, some make
up, Im set!*~
-knock on the door-
Omari: umm Nik can we come in?
Nikki: yeah sure
-in walks Omari, Jarell, and Mario-
Jarell: snap! Damn who takin you out tonite?
Mario: yeah what's the deal? You not gonna put some more clothes on?
Niki: I don't plan on it
Mario: Nik….
Nikki: Mario, why you trippin?
Omari: yeah I think it looks nice
Mario: oh so now you checkin out my sister?
Nikki: you jumpin to conclusions. That's just the way O is you know
that. I plan pn
having fun tonite, going to VIP and meet some peoples aiight
-kisses Mario on his cheek and wraps her arms around Jarell's and
Omari's neck-
Nikki: now where might Dru be. Do yall know?
Omari: yeah he downstairs with his gal. Its good for him he was
acting funny today
Nikki: yeah umm…… wonder why?
Jarell: no time to talk bout Dru its time to ROLL OUT!
Nik and O: ROLL OUT!!
Mario: just hurry up with it
-they all walk downstairs and the club it jumoin! Rell goes over to
the DJ booth to mix, O
goes down to the dance floor, and Mario walks behind the bar. Nikki
walks over to the
stairway to VIP and spots out Dru and Lena-
~* so that's where Dru's been hiding …. Talking his head off and her
attention is else
where. I have to go before he sees me*~
-Nikki cuts though the crowdup to the VIP room-
~* dang music blaring, cris' pouring …., table dances, pole dancing,
lap dances all over, I
don't know what was going through my brothers head when he thought of
what should
have been in this room…… and one lucky male sittin by the bar by
himself*~
- Nikki rubs on her heart shaped pendant on her necklace then wals
over to the VIP bar
she hears familiar voices then ri in front of her is…..-
Ashley: I swear people just cant stay out of my way
Shania: well well well ……
Nikki; look really I don't have time for your foolishness
Shania: I didn't come to here to argue with you,
~* anyways back to what I was doing*~
Nikki: hey papi. What's your name?
Male voice: Brian
~* I know I shouldn't of approached him like a dud was supposed to
approach me, but
when he said his name, turned, looked at e and smiled, I knew I hit
jackpot. When he
smiled he showed those two platinum teeth (with diamonds no doubt)
spaced 2 teeth apart
from each other on his top fronts. For me, that's a turn off usually
but for one its wasn't
all of his fronts and two platinum teeth shows he had mucho dinero.
That chain and iced
out watch helped too. He had waves that seemed to go forever, his
chocolate complexion
and those big sexy lips…. JACKPOT!!!*~
Brian: what are you doing by your self? You cant be single
Nikki: well I am. Oh and by the way my name is Nikki.
Brian: are you up here looking for some one?
Nikki: maybe…..what to you do for a living?
Brian: I work for a record label
~* CHA-CHING*~
Nikki: really? which one?
-Nikki's 2 ways goes off-
~* I swear one day I WILL burn this thing! Ugh …… nevertheless its
Kevin asking me
where I am because he's …. Downstairs?! Damn*~
Brian: who was that?
Nikki: oh no one important. My cousin wanting to know where I am.
Where were we?
Brian: where I work at
Nikki: oh yeah so which label do you work for?
Brian: lets get off that subject…… hw old are you? You look a lil
young
Nikki: 20
Brian: not old enough to drink. I was going to buy you a drink
Nikki: yeah but I don't sweat it that much. I drink a lil but not too
much
Brian: are you in school?
Nikki: nope I just graduated. Early bird.
Brian: what did you study?
Nikki: I stu……
-nikki's 2 way goes off-
~* damn! Kevin again still wanting to know where I am. I got the
first one shit*~
Nikki: aye papi looks like ill have to make a phone call real quick
Brian: I don't want to come between you and your family so call me
later we'll talk
~*yes!*~
Nikki: aiight Brian
~* now for a plan to get out of here safely, ahhhh okay cool Mario*~
Nikki: Mario!
Mario: what you want baby sis
Nikki: how long have you been up here
Mario: like 5 mins. After we came from the dressing room. I had to
get something
Nikki: cool then if anyone asks I called you up here for something
Mario: Nik….
Nikki: Mario please!
Mario: okay
~* good …. What are Rell and O doing up here?*~
Jarell; Nik! Hey Kevin told us to look for you while I were up here
Nikki: what is O doing up here
Omari: O is up here because O and Rell have to look for their
girlfriends
Nikki: whatever just get me outta here aiight
-they walk and pass up Shania and Ashley talking. They dotnt know
that Nik, Rell, O and
Mario are behind them-
Ashely: damn all of that?
Shania:Yep! ha ha! its ashame that we just ask them and we get what
we want
Ashley: yeah but when are we gonna drop them?
Shania; when we use them up!
-they laugh loudly then O snatches the money out of her hand-
Omari: ya know you shouldnt count money in public. some one might
take it.
Shania: hey hey where did yall come from:
Ashley; yeah you cant.......
Omari: come up behind you while you talk about us behind our backs?
Jarell: yeah we gonna put a stop to that. you and me Ashley.... No
More!
Omari: hope you enjoyed it because thats the same with me Shania
- Jarell walks out furious. He stops in front of Nikki-
Nikki: one day your gonna listen to me HA HA!!
-Rell and O march back downstairs and Nikki went to go find Kevin-
Nikki: hey Kevin
Kevin: baby i thought I'd have to come up there and get you myself.
whet were you
doing?
Nikki: i was up stairs talking and helping my brother out. thats all
Kevin: okay i thought that you forgot about our date.
~* oh i wonder how i forgot..... lol*~
Nikki: im sorry Kevy forgive me!
Kevin: lets just dance.....
Nikki: aights
~* barley got away *~
now that you read what i have of this one, check out A Birthday I'll Never Forget which is a horror and tell me what you think aiight.
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