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Subject: Re: Additive


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Letittia
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Date Posted: 19:27:30 06/17/02 Mon
In reply to: Letittia 's message, "Additive (Profile)" on 19:22:02 06/17/02 Mon

Tina wakes up and look at the clock, it said 3:15 am. She looks at the other side of the bed and Mont is not there. She sees the red button flashing on the answer machine. She pushes it

Machine: I have one message

MV: Hey it's me Mont. I'm hanging out with the guys tonight I'll be home late. So see you in the morining. Love ya

Bleep

Machine: Recorded at 12:45 am

Tina rolls over and face the wall. She cuts on the radio and "Song Cry" by Jay Z was playing. She begined to cry, she cried herself back to sleep. The next day Tina wakes up and hears the water running in the bathroom. She walks to the kitchen and rambles in the fridge for some Orange Juice. Mont comes out of the bathroom, he walks to Tina and kisses her on the cheek

Mont: Good morining beautiful

Tina: Hey

Mont goes to the table, Tina wipes her cheek off

Tina: Have fun last night?

Mont: yeah

Tina: Where did you go?

Mont: Didn't you get my message?

Tina: Yeah, but where did ya'll go?

Mont: We just hung out, played pool mostly

Tina: Yeah right

Mont stands up and walks to the couch

Tina: Wait, I have one question

Mont turns around and faces Tina

Tina: Why are you lying to me? Why do you have to break my heart over and over again?

Tina wipes away a tear falling down her cheek

Mont: Here we go again

Tina: If you stop doing it, we wouldn't have to talk about it all the time

Mont: Doing what exactly?

Tina: Screwing around on me

Mont: WHAT? How did we get there

Tina: Reggie told me that he wasn't with you last night

Mont: WHAT? I can't believe

Tina: So where were you really?

Mont: Okay

Mont sighs and sits on the arm of the chair

Mont: I went over Becky's house. But its not what you think

Tina: So its Becky again? And you know what? You just told it on yourself, because I never talked to Reggie last night

Tina walks to the bedroom. Once she's in the bedroom she sits on the bed. Mont follows her

Tina: I'm tired of this. Are you ever gonna change? Why can't you learn how to love me and only me?

Mont: I don't know

Tina: You don't know! You think thats a resonable answer

Mont: But . . .

The phone rings. Mont picks it up

Mont: Hello

Cole: Hey, is Tina there?

Mont: Yeah, but can you call back in like thirty minutes?

Cole: Sure, bye

They hang up

Tina: Who was that?

Mont: Cole, you can call her back later

Tina: No, I'll talk to her now

Mont: We have to talk about this

Tina: No, I'm through talking about it, you have to do it now

Tina walks to the other side of the bed. And calls Cole back

Cole: Hello

Tina: Hey, wassup?

Cole: Oh, nothing much

Mont: Tina, can you talk to me?

Tina: Hold on Cole

Tina puts the phone against her chest

Tina: Can you leave me alone right now?

Mont: Okay, forget it then

Mont walks out of the room. Tina puts the phone back to her ear

Tina: So what are you going to do today?

Cole: I don't know

Mont hollers

Mont: FORGET IT

Mont throws a vase into the bedroom. And it smashes against the nightstand. He walks out

Cole: Oh my god what was that? Are you okay?

Tina: Yeah, I made a mistake and knocked over a vase

Cole: Oh, so do you want to meet for breakfast?

Tina: Sure meet you in 20

Cole: Okay, bye

Tina: bye

Tina hangs up and walks to the other side of the bed and cleans up the mess. She then takes her bath. And leaves to meet Cole. When she walks in the rest. She discovers Maurice is with Cole, her best guy friend

Tina: Hey

She waves at them

Cole/Maurice: Wassup?

Tina sits down

Cole: We already ordered

Tina: Okay, that's cool

Maurice: And how are you today?

Tina: Fine and you?

Maurice: Just great, how's Mont?

*Thinking to himself*

Maurice: You need to leave him

Tina: Fine, crazy as ever

Maurice: That's good

Cole: You sure everything's okay?

Tina: Yeah, why?

Cole: I was just asking

Maurice gets up from the chair

Maurice: I hear "girl talk" coming on. I'm gonna go to the bathroom

Maurice goes to the bathroom

Tina: Why did you ask that?

Cole: Because I know that last week things weren't going good between you and Mont

Tina: Still isn't

Cole: What do you mean?

Tina: He didn't come home til this morining. And he confess to me that he was over Becky house last night.

Cole: WHAT? That trick

Tina: I know that's what I thought

Cole: You need to leave him

Tina: I know but I can't get enough courage to do it. And plus I love him so much

Cole: Tina, baby you know I'm telling you this because I love you. I'm not saying it to hurt your feelings. But he doesn't really love you. If he did he wouldn't be doing this to you

Tina: He does love me

Cole: He doesn't

Cole sees Maurice coming back

Cole: Maurice is coming back

Tina: Don't tell him, because I'll never hear the end of it

Cole: Okay, whatever you what

Maurice sits down

Maurice: Were you talking about how fine I am?

Tina: Yes, don't you love his face

Talking to Cole. Tina touchs Maurice face. Maurice *Thinking to himself*

Maurice: That feels good

The waitress brings them their food. They eat and leave

Maurice: Bye babies! I'm gonna call you tonight

Talking to Tina

Tina: Okay

Maurice kisses Cole and Tina on the cheek

Tina goes to work and gets home about 9:35 pm. She changes into her night clothes and gets into the bed and cuts the radio on. She lies in the bed looking at the wall. She hear the front door open. Mont tip toes back to the bedroom. Mont slips in the bed behind Tina. He puts his arm around her waist.

Mont: I am so sorry

Tina: That's what you say

Mont: I am, you don't know how much I love you

Tina: You don't act like it

Mont: I realize that, and I'm gonna start acting like it

Tina: You promise?

Mont: I promise

Mont turns Tina over and kisses her. They begined to fool around. And "Foolish" by Ashanti came on. And Tina knew she was foolish to stay with him. But it felt good to be in his arms at that moment and feel like he loved her.

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