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Date Posted: 08:50:51 07/05/02 Fri
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Niki
's message, "Re: Hot new story- My Dip (make sure to bump this!)" on 00:10:34 07/05/02 Fri
Title: My Dip
Author: Chocolate Delight
Rating: R but will later change to NC-17
Author’s Notes: Thanx for the reviews everybody. When I first started writing this story I never thought I’d get so many reviews but wham! Look at me now. Here’s Chapter 11. Oh yeah. One more chapter and this story is ova! (Sorry to say). Please read and review!
*~*
It was a very disturbing sight for Omari, Mario, and Jarell. There was their friend Druex “Lil Fizz” Fredericks lying in his bed with a forlorn expression on his face. It was two days after Natalia had japed out on him and would you believe that he was still in the same clothes that he was wearing that day. This was a new experience for Omari, Mario, and Jarell. They ain’t never seen Druex this way because he had such a carefree attitude and didn’t sweat the small shit. But this wasn’t any small shit. This was big. Druex had just lost the girl that made his world complete. The girl that bought a smile to his face everyday. In other words, he lost the girl he loved.
Yeah you heard it hear first. Playboy Fizz has fallen in love. At first he was in denial saying that he only cared for Natalia. But after the first 14 times he called her house, he admitted it to himself that he indeed loves Natalia. But now here was, stanky ass in his bed reliving the worst day of his and Natalia’s life.
“Druex get yo ass up and get ready for Shante’s party,” Omari told his friend.
“I ain’t goin’.”
“Why not? Shante said you can come so let’s go.”
Druex shook his head. “It’s gon be awkward being there with Natalia staring at me and shit. I just can’t handle seeing her.”
Mario sat on a chair and sighed as he played with his do-rag. “Do you want Talia back??”
“Of course dawg.”
“Well come to the party. You could probably convince Natalia that you truly do care for her.”
“Try love nigga.”
“Love?!” Jarell exclaimed. “Damn dawg you have to go to this party now. We can’t leave here knowing that you here mopping over her. So we ain’t leavin' til you get dressed in some Ice Berg.”
Druex shook his head as he rolled out the bed and got ready. The foursome then hopped in Jarell’s Yukon and headed to the Paradise Lounge where the party was being held. When they got there, Omari walked over to Pamala and Mario walked over to Rita. That left Jarell and Druex alone. “Hey y’all.”
Jarell turned around and kissed Morgan on the cheek.
WAIT! I bet all y’all wondering how this happened, huh? Well see that same day when Natalia found out the truth, Jarell and Morgan talked about their relationship. Morgan apologized for snappin the way she did. Jarell apologized for not being straight with her in the first place. Well to make a long story short, the day ended with the two sharing a romantic kiss on Morgan’s front steps. So now they are back together.
“What’s up Morgan?”
“Nothin much Fizz. How ya doin?”
“I’m cool. Yo I’m about to head over to the bar. I’ll see y’all later.”
Druex walked over to the bar where can pops were sitting. As he took a drink from his Pepsi, his breath caught in his throat. There was Natalia wearing a Gucci slip dress that complemented all of her curves. She had on matching Gucci shoes to match and her hair was in a wrap. Natalia looked at Druex and felt her stomach lurch forward when she saw him walking towards her. And without thinking she ran into the bathroom.
*~*
Jerome smiled when Kamesha entered the club with a pair of black jeans and a purple halter-top on. Jerome made his way over to her, which was pretty hard considering how people kept bumping into him. Kamesha met Jerome half way and shot him a nervous smile. “Hey.”
“Hey girl. You look fine as hell.”
Kamesha blushed. “Thanx. You ain’t bad yourself. So do you want to dance?”
Jerome nodded and the two walked to an empty spot on the dance floor. Making Good Love by Avant was on so Jerome pulled Kamesha close and they began to sway to the rhythm of the song. “Can I tell you something?” Kamesha whispered in Jerome’s ear.
“What is it?”
“I’m really scared. I ain’t never been with a boy much less dated one. And I’m afraid that you’re goin to hurt me.”
“I will never hurt you. I promise you that. Do you trust me?”
Kamesha pulled her head up and looked into Jerome’s sandy brown eyes. “Yeah I trust you completely Romeo,” Kamesha said before kissing him on the lips.
*~*
Omari led Pamala to a table when Get This Money by R. Kelly and Jay-Z came on. “I can’t believe you back in my life girl,” Omari said once they were sitting down
“How many times you gon say that?” Pamala asked with a smile.
“Until I can believe that you actually forgave my ass. You know I love you right?”
Pamala nodded. “Yeah. I love you too O and nobody can change that.”
“Ha I beg to differ,” Felicia said with a smirk.
*~*
Natalia walked out the bathroom stall as she wiped her eyes roughly. “Oh this shit is just great. Not only is the boy that I love here I ruined my mascara too.” Natalia wiped her face with a wet paper towel before reapplying her mascara. Just then the door opened and the birthday girl herself walked in looking pissed off about something. But her face softened when she saw her friend’s saddened face. “Tali what’s wrong?”
“Did you know Fizz is here?”
“Yeah. See what had happened was I called him and told him he could come.”
“Why the fuck did you do that?”
“Because unless you want to believe it or not he loves you. He truly loves you. Even if there wasn’t a fuckin bet he would’ve still asked you out. “
“Oh did he tell you that?”
“Naw he ain’t have to tell me because I saw it on his face when he first came up in here. And according to Pamala’s little sister La Tanya who is friends with Fizz’s sister Brooke his ass ain’t been out the bed in two days and he haven’t even washed his ass. Now first fix and collect yourself and go back out there and get you man back because I know you love him.”
“How?”
“Becuz I just do.”
Shante left out the bathroom and prayed that her friends could get back together. Two minutes later, Shante smiled when she saw Natalia walk out the bathroom her head high. Yep she knew she was right. She just hoped that this shit could be resolved once and for all.
*~*
Natalia walked outside to see Druex sitting on the curb. Even though it was dark, she could’ve sworn she saw a tear slide down his face. She stepped closer and put a hand on his shoulder.
Druex looked up and wiped his face. “What you doin out here?”
“I came to talk to you.” Natalia sat next to Druex on the curb.
“You shouldn’t be sitting on the ground. I bet that dress cost like 200 dollars.”
“Actually $150. I got it in a sale.”
Druex turned to look at Natalia. “Look I’m sorry for that bet. It was stupid I know but I felt like I had something to prove to them niggas. But I guess I never did think about your feelings so if you don’t want to see me or talk to me again, I can…”
Druex was cut off when Natalia’s lips crashed onto his.
*~*
There’s Part 11. I hoped y’all liked it. Please read and review so I can put up the next and the final chapter.
Chocolate Delight.
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