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Subject: MY 1ST STORY *ANOTHA LOVE THANG* PLEASE READ AND REVIEW

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CHRISTEE

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Date Posted: 16:30:18 07/17/02 Wed

Anotha love thang

profiles:

Resse-21 yrs. old 5'5' got dark brown eyes.nice chocolate complection.She thick.dark Brown hair wit a tint of bugandy.her hair goes al lil past her shoulders.She loves to laugh and she is brutally honest. If u ask her, "Do i look cute?", and u dont she'll be like,"Hell naw u dont look cute".she cool ta hang wit and a good listener. she best friends wit Crystal.Thas her partna in crime.

Crystal-21 yrs. old 5'4'. she thick too.brownish redish hair but always wears braids.real nice person.a bit of a punk at times. she cool wit mostly everyone.she goes wit Jarrel.they been goin tagether for 2 yrs. She a good listener. Resse is her best friend.her and Resse share an apartment and they both go to UCLA in their last year of college.

---Resse and Talia's apartment---(Resse's point of view)

" Gurl I dont know what to do" i said ta ma friend. "u still worried bout transferin", Crystal asked me."Hell yeah i am. Ive been wantin to go to stanford Medical school since i was a freshman in high school", i responded."Well was the problem?" Crystal asked me."Have you been hit wit tha stupid stick cause you know damn well what the problem is" i say ta crystal all evilish. "Shut up. Its not ma fault that u aint tell Rome dat you got in with a scholarship" Crystal responded to my smart ass comment.i say " I dont even know why im trippin cause me and Rome aint even goin together". "Man everyone and hey mommas know dat yall feelin eachotha.Dis aint high school. Go get yo man" said Crystal."I know. Imma go to his house right now" as soon as I said that i walked out the door and got into my 98 Volkswagon Cabriolete. I went to his door and rang the door bell.i aint even gonna lie I was so damn scared I in want him to reject me. Then he open the door. He was lookin so fine like always. His cornrows were freshly done and he was wearin his black jeans that I loved so much wit his wife beater dat showed all his muscles. " Hey Resses pieces" Rome said to me before given me a hug.He called me Resses pieces cause I love dat candy and ma first name is Resse."Hi Rome". "What brings You by?" he askes me."Man i aint even came inside and u already askin me questions?" i said to him wit an attitude. Then Rome says,"Oh im sorry Baby Girl".Then we go into his house and sit on his sofa. "Rome I need to ask u something" I said while lookin into his eyes."What is it?" he asked me. "I'm really feelin dis guy and im fallin in love wit him, but i dont know if he juss playin around or if he is really feelin me. What should I do?" i asked him him.Little did i know dis fool dont know im talkin bout him.I could see the sadness in his eyes turn to anger.Then he said,"I thought that we had somthing special and know you gonna go and fall in love wit some otha nigga? and to think I thought I was in love wit you". I wanted to laugh at him. WAIT did he say that he loved me REWIND.*AND I THOUGHT I WAS IN LOVE WIT YOU* yep he did. Alright back to the present."Negro im talkin bout you. You the only 1 that im in love wit" i said to him.Then Rome pulled me close to him and kissed me passionatly for like 10 minutes. Dat boy can kiss too. Ididnt wanna let go until Jarrel's big headed self busted through the door like he was an FBI agent. "Did i miss something, when did yall hook up?" he juss ruined everything it was gettin hot and heated too. Rome was lookin all Heated when he said,"You juss had to come in and ruin the moment,but we juss got together." Then Jarrel gonna say,"Good cause everyone and they mommas know dat yall feelin eachother". Then he gonna start to laugh."Ha Ha very funny yo girl said the same thing.Speakin of Crystal why dont u go over thier and see her while we get back to where we were before you juss busted in" i said that to him wit an attitude."You dont have to ask me twice.1" he said that before he left."Thank God he left. I Love u Resse" Rome said to me. Then i said "Ilove you too". Yall probably like they juss start goin together and they already sayin that they love eachother.I have always loved Rome ever since i was 19 when I met him through Jarrel and Crystal.We have always been close friends that always flirted with eachother but he never got together because i had a boyfriend. Me and Mario broke up 8 months ago when i caught him sleepin wit ma ex-friend in his house. We ha been goin together ever since freshman year in college. When i caught him sheatin on me i beat Mekka's a** then i beat his a** too.Thas 1 thind bout me I dont play.Anyways was mad cheesin when i was lookin at him then my smilies turned into a frown."Baby was wrong" Rome asked me while lifting up my chin to see the tear runnin down ma cheek."Rome im sorry to tell you this but...." i said to him in a low tone."Resse i cant hear you speak up" when he said hat I ooked him dead in the eyes said,"Rome i got excepted into Stanford medical school".

WHAT IS ROME GONNA SAY OH YEAH IF U WANNA BE IN MA STORY PUT YOUR PROFILE UNDER MA POST
tell me what you think and I'll add more

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Re: MY 1ST STORY ANOTHA LOVE THANG PLEASE READ AND REVIEW	Angelica	10:24:05 07/18/02 Thu