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Date Posted: 11:21:28 10/19/01 Fri
Author: Tom W
Author Host/IP: AC8F1DE7.ipt.aol.com / 172.143.29.231
Subject: Some helpful advice...
In reply to: Black Talon 's message, "Try Out" on 03:32:08 10/19/01 Fri

You have potential, but you lack several skills.

When someone speaks, make it clear.
i.e.: Tyrone: or Tyrone- or any some fancy way to make it easier to read. It looks messy if you leave it as just:

"Tyrone who’s that man in the viper? Does anyone know who that guy is?"

To me that's like some mysterious person asking Tyrone a question when it should say:

"Tyrone: who’s that man in the viper? Does anyone know who that guy is?"

See, that's easier to read.

Other things you need to do is make it so the narration is easy to see. Use () or [] or some other sort of bracket to seperate the narration from the rest of the roleplay. Most people don't know the EOW so we wouldn't have a clue to who you are. So for an introduction in a diff fed, if you are going to bring up an old federation, then have your wrestler talk about it, or give some background info. Not just saying "is it that guy from EOW? He's trouble... etc..." As always I suggest reading GWA rps to get a feel for what I'm talking about. Take this sample and edit things I talked about and add some stuff if you'd like. I suggest reposting an edited version that will look more professional. Do that and your chances of getting into the GWA will increase greatly.

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