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Date Posted: 12:02:11 10/31/01 Wed
Author: Tom W
Author Host/IP: ACA8EC3E.ipt.aol.com / 172.168.236.62
Subject: A bit of advice...
In reply to: Christian Setade 's message, "Tryout RP for GWA - SECOND POSTING" on 12:59:05 10/27/01 Sat

You have a great start, but reading what I read, it appears that this rp would be half of an awesome rp, if you put your mind to it. A closing scene would be helpful. I'm sure you'd make a great addition to the GWA roster with a few improvements. The main one is a closing scene. Don't just end with someone talking.

Like I always tell people, just check out some of the GWA rps. You'll be able to get some ideas from us, which is the best way to improve, but in doing so, do what works for you.

If you want any advice, you can always email me. I left my email address just in case you choose to do so.

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