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Date Posted: 14:48:24 11/18/01 Sun
Author: Ashram
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 131.118.71.224
Subject: Re: Tryout
In reply to: "The Rookie" Billy Blake 's message, "Tryout" on 11:24:55 11/18/01 Sun

Well to be honest, parts of the rp seemed a bit rushed.It was'nt bad at all, just seemed like you skipped ahead alot.....Maybe have some more dialogue between your characters.Another member of GWA said this about another rp'r who tried out, and I think it could very well apply here....This seems to be one part of a larger rp.If you want any more advice or a more indepth analysis, hit me up on aim Docgomez12

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