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Date Posted: 02:43:50 05/12/01 Sat
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: Fallen Angel (Part I)
In reply to: Deadpoet 's message, "Fallen Angel (Part I)" on 20:49:42 05/11/01 Fri

I have enjoyed reading your posts tonight/morning lol
you have some good images combined with feeling that
is easily realised when reading,

This stanza stood out particulary as the use of
contrast is very good

She reaches out
With her hardened heart
Her delicate skin
Brushes my wind
Torn Face bringing a peace
Into my soul

Thanks for posting
I enjoyed reading

Rafael

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