Re: A brush with silence -- The Chasm

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Date Posted: 10:24:45 04/22/01 Sun
Author: SandieAngel
Subject: Re: A brush with silence
In reply to: Rafa�l 's message, "A brush with silence" on 10:38:24 04/21/01 Sat

I love the story, Rafael! It is well-written.

Well, as a reader's point of view, I must say that I enjoyed the story very much. The first part seemed to drag on a little with too much descriptive details and too little dialogues; but the second sensual part seemed to have quickly caught up with the rhythm quite well.

As a reader for the story, I love it!

SandieAngel

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Re: A brush with silence -- Rafa�l, 15:22:17 04/22/01 Sun
- Re: A brush with silence -- SandieAngel :o), 05:41:56 04/23/01 Mon

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