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Date Posted: 08:27:25 03/03/01 Sat
Author: SandieAngel :o)
Subject: Re: highlander sent me here.... so what do u think?
In reply to: holland 's message, "highlander sent me here.... so what do u think?" on 02:35:14 03/03/01 Sat

Do not lie to yourself, you have no joy in this life you have found, unless you choose to stand up on your own two feet, no one else can do that for you.

So now you're on the ground now, lying there, but do you want to stand up again? Just remember.....


The truest joy in one's life
is not from falling down

It's from being able to stand up again
after one has fallen.

If you don't believe God can do something for you, then try to believe in yourself. Our lives are in our own hands, it's what we make of it.

Now back to your poems here:

Take out all those abbreviations. Try using the correct form of words to write. If your really want to be a successful poet then start by writing every word in its originality.

Aside from this flaw, your poems are really great! Very heartfelt! Well, at least I can really feel your pain and anguish. These were well-displayed in your poems. You certainly have the talents for writing poetry, but I certainly would not use the abbreviations if I were you.

Hope to see more of your fine poetry, I can see why Highlander want to sent you here, for he knows talents when he sees one. So, what are you going to do with your talents?

Write to me if you want to talk. My address is:

sandieangel_2000@yahoo.co.uk

SandieAngel :o)

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  • Re: highlander sent me here.... so what do u think? -- Highlander, 18:15:43 03/03/01 Sat
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