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Date Posted: 18:26:02 01/26/01 Fri
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: Icebound--(corrected)
In reply to: paris 's message, "Icebound--(corrected)" on 13:11:47 01/26/01 Fri

Good use of contrast here

I also like your wording,

death leering over my shoulder,
i lastly scribble in my
journal, "any man that dies
frozen shall remain frozen
while burning in the icy flames
of this freezing hell."


For me this ended the piece well

Thanks, Paris


Rafael

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