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Date Posted: 05:32:06 10/10/02 Thu
Author: 快亦通
Subject: Re: [譯詩多多fun自由貼] 達衛許的(I am from There)
In reply to: よ忽 's message, "[亩钢funパ禟] 笷矫砛(I am from There)" on 10:38:42 10/09/02 Wed

我完全沒有譯詩的經驗，也不大了解原詩的含意，但我覺得方綺的中譯實在譯得太直了，看起來有點不中不英，所以我昨晚在不求甚解的情況下，寫了這個較「中文化」的譯本︰

我來自那兒

我來自那兒，我記得我來自那兒，
我的出身和別人一樣，一樣有一個母親
一棟房子，幾個窗子。
我有兄弟，有朋友，也有一個監房。
我有給海鷗拖走了的浪花。
我有一己之見，再加一刀草葉。
我有一輪明月，照在文字之巔。
我有天賜的鳥飼和橄欖樹，連時間也不曉得。
我比刀劍更早劃過成為宴饗的軀體。
我來自那兒。當天空哭著叫媽媽的時候
我就把它還給母親，我落淚了，
連雲兒也不明白我。
我從染血的宮廷上學到一些術語，
誓要打破一切規條。
我最後卻把所學到的字辭都抺掉，除了一個︰
家

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既然是自由貼，我就將這不負責任的譯本貼在這兒。

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