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Date Posted: 10:37:06 09/27/02 Fri
Author: 抓住一把泥沙的呆子
Subject: Re: 誰也無權用「多餘和戇居」這些字眼去嘲笑別人的感情
In reply to: 老陳 's message, "補充一點" on 09:38:46 09/27/02 Fri

>很想為你做一件事，一件令你快樂的事，那就是親手抹殺你的?>祤痋A去保留快樂的回憶，之餘此類，除整色整水外，不是有點
>多餘和戇居嗎?

談詩而已，同意與否都無傷大雅，言詞激烈於事無補。
「很想為你做一件事
一件令你快樂的事」
這兩行除了正讀，有沒有嘗試反讀？
為什麼用你的頸圈殺你心愛的貓「令你快樂」？
有沒有可能是類似「我頹廢你就開心」、「你既無情，我更無情」、「你不珍惜，我就不珍惜給你看」的反話呢？
再說一遍，殺貓這隱喻的對象不在「快樂」，而在「記憶」－－快樂過，但不再快樂的「記憶」。
關於詩，要說的都說過了，當然有權說「看不出來，是呆子」，這世上真有太多抓住一把泥沙的呆子。
可以同意，也可以不同意，談詩而己，能夠交流不妨多談兩句，話不投機各自喝口茶，只是有一點起碼的要求：這是一首傾吐感情的詩，無論喜歡或不喜歡，「姿整」、﹝整色整水」已是可接受的底線，誰也無權用「多餘和戇居」這些字眼去嘲笑別人的感情。
－－喂，同你唔係好熟喎！

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