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Date Posted: 13:35:20 09/27/02 Fri
Author: 方綺
Subject: 咁俾面貼余光中? 我喜歡果首[雙人床], 嘿嘿....
In reply to: 不信 's message, "很高興來到你們的聚會！" on 12:16:55 09/27/02 Fri

雙人床

讓戰爭在雙人床外進行
躺在你長長的斜坡上
聽流彈，像一把呼嘯的螢火
在你的，我的頭頂竄過
竄過我的鬍鬚和你的頭髮
讓政變和革命在四周吶喊
至少愛情在我們的一邊
至少破曉前我們很安全
當一切都不再可靠
靠在你彈性的斜坡上
今夜，即使會山崩或地震
最多跌進你低低的盆地
讓旗和銅號在高原上舉起
至少有六尺的韻律是我們
至少日出前你完全是我的
仍滑膩，仍柔軟，仍可以燙熟
一種純粹而精細的瘋狂
讓夜和死亡在黑的邊境
發動永恆第一千次圍城
惟我們循螺紋急降，天國在下
捲入你四肢美麗的漩渦

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Replies:

當,雙人床我也極喜歡,我覺得這兩首是同一主題的兩種演譯。 -- 不信, 20:02:10 09/27/02 Fri
- 這種詩, 余光中熟到爛了 -- 昌, 20:24:18 09/27/02 Fri
- 開心死了，你倆竟然貼余光中 -- 林一葉, 21:18:36 09/27/02 Fri
  - 我的看法也是一樣,所以也比較喜歡〈如果遠方有戰爭〉.. -- 不信, 09:50:08 09/28/02 Sat
在現代寫唔寫到這種情詩呢? 要求愈高, 情詩愈難寫... 很容易落入俗套 (NT) -- 方綺, 12:26:41 09/28/02 Sat

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