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Date Posted: 09:34:58 10/02/02 Wed
Author: 捕手
Subject: 用不著這樣說話吧
In reply to: 方綺 's message, "詩的語法篇" on 00:37:52 10/02/02 Wed

我又不是說詩要嚴謹遵守語法, 不過提出一個字用得是否適當, 是否多餘的問題而已. 你們寫詩時大概也會斟酌用字, 反覆修改, 目的也只是希望作品達到希望的效果吧. 一個字的取捨繫於是否符合作者的意思, 或者作者故意令意思含糊亦說不定. 這個"了"字如果在詩中沒有作用, 語法上是多餘, 為什麼不值得談? 難道連一首作品的用字用句都不應討論, 不值討論? 還是我只應該談談天氣, 寒暄幾句, 亙相讚美一番算數?

照你的說法,請看以下幾句:

方綺這虫吃了
胃酸激發了意志
拼了命亂踢了虫
終於一伸了十腳
虫在虫中死了

其實作者的意思可能是:

方綺吃了這虫
胃酸激發了意志
虫拼命亂踢
終於十腳一伸
虫在虫中死了

問題誇張了十倍, 道理還是一樣. 語法錯誤可以是無傷大雅, 卻也可以歪曲詩的意思, 甚至令其不知所云.

另外, 照你的態度可以這樣說:

如果你重看以上你的所謂不文笑話, 仍然覺得是不文笑話, 建議你多讀些不文笑話, 或許對患畏賓症的人有所幫助.

又不如說:

如果你再想十秒仍然認為寫詩不用顧及語法, 建議你多想些, 或許對腦袋閉塞的人有所幫助.

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