Re: Oceans of Orgasm -- The Fatted Calf

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Subject: Re: Oceans of Orgasm

Author:
Raphaela

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Date Posted: 12:16:11 10/01/01 Mon
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In reply to: TRJ 's message, "Oceans of Orgasm" on 10:15:08 10/01/01 Mon

Well - as my other name is Oceana - I just had to dive right into this poem and I certainly wasn't disappointed. You have a unique style Tracy. Tight lines which reveal so much more as well as evoking all the senses. I love the portrayal of colour as well as the metaphorical imagery - and oh what an orgasm to crash through the skull ;)

Wonderful *sigh*

Raphaela

>Shaman sleep speak
>You penetrate
>Swim deep
>In flashes
>Of red and orange
>At the base of my spine
>Into vibrating, clinching womb
>Reaching yellow suns
>Burning in my belly
>Heart fingered by green vines
>Stirring love, divine compassion
>My throat singing songs of devotion
>To the holy blue of your eyes
>My own mind's eye opened
>To indigo embrace passion mark
>Beneath the surface, invisible,
>But tender to the touch
>Bringing smiles of memory
>Of you thrusting yourself forward
>Filling me
>Until your breath is held
>And you exit my body
>Spreading heavenward from my skull--
>
>I swim in violet seas
>Satiated
>But starving
>For more.

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Subject	Author	Date
Re: Oceans of Orgasm	TRJ	11:49:34 10/02/01 Tue
Re: Oceans of Orgasm -- Raphaela, 15:42:05 10/02/01 Tue