Re: Winter Shrouded Moons -- The Fatted Calf

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Subject: Re: Winter Shrouded Moons

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T.R. Jones

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Date Posted: 14:25:59 12/03/00 Sun
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In reply to: William James Blackford 's message, "Winter Shrouded Moons" on 19:41:44 12/01/00 Fri

Thank you so much for posting here!! I hope you have enjoyed some of my meager offerings here as much as I have enjoyed this wonderful work. The use of Haiku stanzas! Wonderful! As well, you incorporated the classic themes of seasons melded with sincere sensuality. How could I not love this work!!!!> Winter Shrouded Moons
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> Winter white and gray
> frosted winds; cataract eyes
> Fall's leafless solitude
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> I see wispy clouds
> that taunt of your warmth as mock
> fingers uncurling
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> Hollow distant wrongs
> feed streams of pale pained edges;
> our torn tearing slowly
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> Yet life brings your face
> Sword pierces up from the ice pond
> Compass blade glinting
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> Smell of tepid sun
> Seeds split; fetal green in earth
> Warmth backed my chilled thoughts;
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> Rarity awaits
> within smiling eyes unfurling
> harmless, endless depths

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