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Subject: The Pantoum, my attempt

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Tralfaz

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Date Posted: 00:28:52 03/28/01 Wed
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He pushes down adolescent fears
He gathers all his boyish charm
The object of desires near
He smiles and says "well what's the harm"

He gathers all his boyish charm
His heart jumps when she looks at him
He smiles and says "well what's the harm"
He might not get this chance again

His heart jumps when she looks at him
He peacocks to nubile delight
He may not get this chance again
The first kiss of this young boys life

He peacocks to nubile delight
She laughs at his demure display
The first kiss of this young boys life
Will this be his lucky day

She laughs at his demure display
He pushes down adolescent fears
Will this be his lucky day
The object of desire near

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Re: The Pantoum, my attempt	TRJ	08:46:20 04/02/01 Mon