Re: Constellation -- The Fatted Calf

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Re: Constellation

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Jjaz

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Date Posted: 19:45:00 04/04/01 Wed
Author Host/IP: NoHost/216.161.82.157
In reply to: TRJ 's message, "Constellation" on 12:07:05 04/04/01 Wed

Excellent use of words Isis. Inspite of the softer touch, you still write extremely well..
one thing.. "lands and galaxies" did not work for me. Mostly the word "lands: kind of distracted for me.
But, both are still excellent in my opinion!

Hugs

Jjaz
>You go deeper than the flesh
>With fluid hands of harmony
>Reaching with sculpting fingers
>Into delicate spirit skin
>Folds of the soul
>Borders opened
>Lands and galaxies to be explored
>To leave your signature
>In the points of a billion stars
>Beaming pleasure.

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Subject	Author	Date
Re: Constellation	TRJ	08:31:35 04/05/01 Thu
Re: Constellation -- Jjaz, 15:18:17 04/05/01 Thu