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Date Posted: 21:04:00 01/17/00 Mon
Author: hd
Subject: continued
In reply to: hd 's message, "Critiques Invited but..." on 21:01:07 01/17/00 Mon

DIZZY AND IN DESPAIR, SIMON LOOKED UP. HE WAS IN WAY OVER HIS HEAD. WEAK, HE BEGAN TO KICK. SIMON SAW STARS AS HE STRUGGLED TO REACH THE SURFACE. HE FELT THE BLACKNESS ROLL OVER HIS FOREHEAD AND DOWN HIS FACE, PUSHING HIS
EYELIDS CLOSED. HIS BODY SLOWED, NO LONGER ABLE TO PUSH ITSELF THROUGH THE WATER. SIMON'S LEGS STOPPED KICKING. THERE WAS NO FEAR. NO EMOTION OF ANY KIND. ONLY EMPTINESS. EMPTINESS AND EXHAUSTION. HE DIDN'T REMEMBER LETTING
GO OF HIS SPEARGUN. THE BLACKNESS OBSCURED EVERYTHING. THERE WAS NO SOUND. NO SENSATION OF THE WATER. NO COLD. NOTHING. THE BLACKNESS ABSORBED EVERYTHING, AS IT DID SIMON.
"SO THIS IS WHAT IT'S LIKE TO DROWN," HE THOUGHT.
THE SPEAR SHAFT HIT THE SANDY BOTTOM HARD, STICKING UPRIGHT LIKE AN UNDERWATER EXCALIBER, BECKONING TO BE DRAWN BY THE NEXT RULER OF THIS DOMAIN. THE TEAK STOCK FLOATED SEVERAL FEET ABOVE IT, ANCHORED BY THE KEVLAR LANYARD. IT HAD MISSED THE REEF AND COME TO REST IN 118 FEET OF WATER. SIMON DIDN'T FEEL THE WARMTH OF SUNSHINE ON HIS NECK AS HE BROKE
THE SURFACE. HE LAID THERE, FACE DOWN IN THE WATER WITHOUT MOVING.
"HEY! ARE YOU OKAY?!" CAME A VOICE. IT SOUNDED FAMILIAR. AS IF IN A DREAM, SIMON WAS AWARE HE WAS BEING PULLED UP, OUT OF THE WATER.
"BREATHE DAMNIT!!
THE STING OF A SMART SLAP ON HIS CHEEK OPENED HIS EYES.
"ARE YOU OKAY?! SIMON! ARE YOU ALRIGHT?!"
SIMON SHOOK HIS HEAD AND TOOK A DEEP BREATH.
HIS FRIEND BILLY HAD PULLED HIM INTO THEIR BOAT.
"YOU BLACKED OUT MAN. I THOUGHT YOU WERE PUTTIN' ME ON, PRETENDING TO BE DEAD. YOU SURE WERE DOWN A LONG TIME. ARE YOU ALRIGHT?"
AS SIMON'S COLOR CAME BACK AND HIS HEAD CLEARED, HE LEARNED THAT HE HAD SURFACED ONLY FOUR FEET FROM THEIR INFLATABLE BOAT.
"WHERE'S MY GUN?" ASKED SIMON, LOOKING AROUND THE SMALL CRAFT.
"I DUNNO. YOU MUST HAVE DROPPED IT." BILLY'S WORDS WOUNDED SIMON.
HE LOST THE FISH, HE COULDN'T LOSE HIS NEW GUN. THEN SIMON'S EYES CLOSED TIGHTLY AND HE KNEELED, GRABBING HIS STOMACH. "YOU'RE NOT GONNA BARF IN THE BOAT ARE YA?
"NO!" SIMON GRUNTED, STILL TRYING TO CATCH HIS BREATH. THE ONLY THING THAT WAS COMING UP WAS HIS NEW SPEARGUN. THIS HE VOWED.

SIMON SPENT THE NEXT TWENTY MINUTES CATCHING HIS BREATH AND RELAYING HIS STORY OF THE WHITE TO BILLY. A TRUE FRIEND, BILLY LISTENED INTENTLY, ABSORBING EACH INTIMATE
DETAIL, NEVER QUESTIONING ANY STATEMENT. HIS BEST FRIEND WOULD NEVER LIE TO HIM AND SPEARFISHING WAS A MOST HONORABLE SPORT. NOT LIKE FISHING WITH A ROD AND REEL WHERE LIES WERE SPILLED LIKE BEER. THIS WAS A COMPLETELY DIFFERENT WAY TO CATCH FISH. ALMOST SPIRITUAL IN NATURE. THE ACCOMPLISHED
SPEARFISHERMAN FOLLOWED A STRICT CODE OF ETHICS. NEVER SHOOT A SMALL FISH. NEVER KILL ANYTHING YOU WON'T EAT. NEVER KILL MORE FISH THAN YOU NEED. MOST
IMPORTANTLY, NEVER SHOOT A SPAWNING FISH. A FISH PREPARING TO SPAWN HUNDREDS, PERHAPS THOUSANDS OF NEW FISH WAS REVERED ABOVE ALL OTHERS. SIMON AND BILLY ADHERED TO ALL THESE LAWS. THEY FELT CONNECTED TO THE SEA. IT WAS THEIR MOTHER. SHE
PROVIDED FOR THEM AND THEY OBEYED HER LAWS.

"MAYBE IT'S STILL DOWN THERE!" BILLY SAID WITH ENTHUSIASM. "NAW...HE'S GONE." SIMON DRONED IN A DEADPAN VOICE.
"BUT IF YOU GOT IT IN SUCH A PERFECT PLACE, IT COULDN'T LIVE LONG. MAYBE IT SUNK RIGHT AFTER IT SLIPPED THE SHAFT!" BILLY WOULDN'T GIVE UP.
IT'S GONE OKAY?!" SIMON SNAPPED. BILLY DIDN'T SAY ANOTHER WORD ABOUT IT. THEY BOTH SAT IN THE BOUNCING BOAT IN SILENCE, BOTH PAINFULLY AWARE OF THE SPEARGUN RETRIEVAL PROBLEM FACING THEM. STARING INTO THE BLUE PURPLE
WATER, THEY PONDERED THEIR OPTIONS. LEAVING IT BEHIND WAS NOT ONE OF THEM. AFTER SEVERAL MINUTES, SIMON LOOKED UP AND SPOKE THE ONLY WORDS EITHER OF THEM WOULD VOICE. THE DECISION WAS MADE. THERE WOULD BE NO DISCUSSION.
"PULL UP THE ANCHOR. IT'S ALMOST DUSK" SIMON'S FACE WAS DETERMINED. BILLY UNDERSTOOD AND BEGAN PULLING THE
ROPE IN. HE KNEW BETTER THAN TO QUESTION SIMON'S DECISION. HE WOULD HAVE MADE THE SAME ONE, IF HE HAD LOST HIS GUN IN DEEP WATER. SIMON BEGAN HYPERVENTILATING. INHALING AND EXHALING QUICKLY TO ABSORB AS MUCH OXYGEN INTO HIS BLOODSTREAM AS HE COULD.
"G'LUCK," BILLY SAID.
WITH THAT, SIMON GRABBED THE ANCHOR AND DOVE OVERBOARD. HE DESCENDED FAST AND KEPT ONE HAND ON HIS
NOSE, CLEARING HIS EARS AS HE PENETRATED THE COOLING DEPTHS. HIS EYES WERE MERE SLITS, TRYING TO PIERCE THE DARKENING GLOOM IN SEARCH OF HIS GUN. HE KNEW IT WOULD BE NEARBY, HE FELT THE NYLON ANCHOR LINE RUB ACROSS HIS THIGH,
THE BUBBLES FROM HIS MOUTH TRAILING ACROSS HIS BODY, WITHIN SECONDS HE WAS ABLE TO SEE THE BOTTOM. SIMON RELEASED THE ANCHOR AND BEGAN KICKING ACROSS THE SAND BOTTOM. A SMALL HALIBUT SHOT OUT, LEAVING A TRAIL OF SAND BEHIND IT LIKE A COMET. THE OCEAN SEEMED STILL, AS IF IT TOO WERE HOLDING ITS
BREATH. SIMON'S NARROW EYES NEARLY EXPLODED AT THE SIGHT OF HIS SPEAR SHAFT STUCK IN THE SAND. ELECTRICITY SNOT THROUGH HIS BODY AS HE FRANTICALLY KICKED TOWARDS HIS GUN. "GOTCHA!", SIMON'S HAND GRIPPED THE GUN TIGHT. THE HUNTER BEGAN HIS ASCENT IN THE GLIMMERING TWILIGHT.


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