VoyForums
[ Show ]
Support VoyForums
[ Shrink ]
VoyForums Announcement: Programming and providing support for this service has been a labor of love since 1997. We are one of the few services online who values our users' privacy, and have never sold your information. We have even fought hard to defend your privacy in legal cases; however, we've done it with almost no financial support -- paying out of pocket to continue providing the service. Due to the issues imposed on us by advertisers, we also stopped hosting most ads on the forums many years ago. We hope you appreciate our efforts.

Show your support by donating any amount. (Note: We are still technically a for-profit company, so your contribution is not tax-deductible.) PayPal Acct: Feedback:

Donate to VoyForums (PayPal):

Login ] [ Contact Forum Admin ] [ Main index ] [ Post a new message ] [ Search | Check update time | Archives: 1[2] ]
Subject: Journey: Awake


Author:
Ian Line
[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]
Date Posted: 01:29:25 03/12/03 Wed

Journey: Awake
By: Ian Line

Eyes open from pitch black. The only vision is through the blur of the slightly opened eyes. The vision obscured by eye lashes weaved together with the morning crust off to the side of your eyes. Trying to gain vision you feel nothing of your body, just an ache in your neck surrounding your neck bones. Wind faintly blows over the cracked lips. Your tongue climbs out of your mouth to moisten your lips. Squinting your eyes and you feel the rest of your face move with a stiff dryness. You begin to lift your head. You still can’t see anything through the blur of your readjusting eyes. AS you lift the rest of your upper body you are able to feel each and every movement and muscle and bone. You realize small pebbles falling off your back. As if you were lying on small rocks. Vision begins to set in as you try to focus on any color difference and shapes you notice. You focus on a dark blurred object with a circular bright yellowish orange color above it. Your eyes begin to focus themselves on the brighter object. A clearer vision of this round object comes to vision. As you notice this object you feel heat come over the part of your body that is facing this object. You then begin to notice the darker object below the bright object. Its color becomes clearer and its image is sharper. Its color’s are ranged from black shadows to dark browns. It looks as if it is far away. Around the bottom of this object white fades from the blue and back to white. Surrounding this object on all sides is a massive dark blue moving object. Randomly white fades from the top of the blue and fades back to the dark blue.

A flash of white blurs out your vision and sound rushes into your head. The sound crashes around your head in high tones as of massive amounts of water being spilled over water; then deep rumble of thunder following the waters high tones. You begin to feel your legs to rumble and the ground beneath you begins to shake. Slowly the sounds fade away and new sounds lightly come into your head. Sounds of smaller waves and splashes settle into conscience. A new sound and feeling comes upon you from behind. Your hair fly’s forward in front of your face and a howl and rumble is in your ear. A chill runs down your spine and goose bumps rise from your arms. The wind dies down to a calm breeze. You take a deep breath after that new experience. The cool air goes up into your nose and straight down into your body and fills your chest. For the first time you smell a cool salty smell of great freshness and a sweet melting aroma that sticks to the back of your nose.

You look around scanning the vast blue object with white caps, only to find the one tall object and the bright light and heat. You try to focus harder on the other blank spaces. You notice a light blue color bordering the dark blue object with white caps. You see white puffy objects of different shades of darkness and sizes are on the light blue massive color. You notice in your peripheral vision that this giant space is all around you and as far as you can see you and to your sides. It is as if it goes on for ever. The white clouds move as if they knew where to go. All clouds moving in the same direction. Some clouds running into other, building into larger clouds.

You take your attention off the large open sky and look down. You can focus better on things. You see a wide area with main tall triangular green objects swaying in unison with each other. You notice the intense smell of a sweet melting aroma that stuck to the back of your nose came from there.

Without looking around any more you try to stand and walk to the aroma. Your legs wobble, knees knocking ankles twisting. You feel as if the light wind is going to knock you over. You sway as if you never walked before. The sound of the waves crashing fad in and out as your ears adjust to this new environment. Your dry eyes feel even dryer when the light wind wisps across them. The cool air feeling freezes your throat. The sun lightly heating the side of your body as the other side of your body is cold with the wind lightly pushing at you. Your feet sift over small rocks.

As you slowly hobble your way towards the sweet aroma of the green objects, the objects grow larger and become clearer. You see small branches with many small branches or needles on it. The wind blows a spinning gust of smells into your nose. Your eyes roll back into your head with pure enjoyment of this wonderful piney smell. Your legs give as you fall into a trance from the fragrance. You roll back onto your back and comfort sets into every part of your body. Your sore neck is relaxed as your vision clears to near perfect. While you lay there in a trance you are looking straight up to the sky looking through the trees. You begin to feel tired and your eyes slowly close. Your vision fades to black and feeling fades to nothing.

[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]


Post a message:
This forum requires an account to post.
[ Create Account ]
[ Login ]
[ Contact Forum Admin ]


Forum timezone: GMT-5
VF Version: 3.00b, ConfDB:
Before posting please read our privacy policy.
VoyForums(tm) is a Free Service from Voyager Info-Systems.
Copyright © 1998-2019 Voyager Info-Systems. All Rights Reserved.